stlpixurs's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Skate Movie: Part One]

Potential rolled right through your fingers...

It wasn't bad, especially for someone new to Flash. The sound could have been a little more involved, but the music seemed to fit the scene very well. I was finding myself 'waiting for the punchline' so to speak. I think you could definitely improve upon the movie by adding some indirect danger to the scene. Maybe the sparks ignite some spilled gasoline and burn the photographer? A trail of destruction, usually as an indirect effect of the main character, is usually comic gold. Consider adding something like that to your next movie and you should be very well rewarded!

T.H.

Scribbler responds:

Hey, those are some great ideas and I wish you had contacted me prior to this movie. We could have done something.

This was a long time ago and I don't have plans of making something like this anymore. I was thinking about re-editing this to make it more appealing but that would defeat the whole purpose of this being my "FIRST" flash. It's here, anybody can watch it, and I am glad that many of you enjoy it.

Thank you for the generous review.